I have whittled the variations of the last stanza of “Mist on the Mountain” down to three; a task that has consumed me for more than a week. One of these shall appear in the final draft, likely in altered form. As the completion of the poem draws near, I am overcome with anticipation!
Thoughts
A Steenbok?

It is my custom on Sundays to venture out among the hills just before daylight. Twice now I have spotted on one of the hillsides an antelope browsing.
Though on both occasions it was too distant for an accurate identification, I believe it to be a female Steenbok1 (Raphicerus campestris)2.
I base this solely upon the general shape and colour of the creature—and the name of the nearby mountain, Steenboksberg3 (Steenbok’s Mountain)!
- Afrikaans for “stone-buck”, pronounced [steeyin-bok].
- Steenbok (Wikipedia)
- Afrikaans, pronounced [steeyin-boks-behRCH] with a trilled [RRR] and the [CH] in “loch” (not [ck] but the guttural [kccch]).
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Whilst photographing the Southern Red Bishops yesterday, this Cape Skimmer (Orthetrum julia capensis) was my companion.